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Hullo Gyr. ^_^ ...I've fallen behind in reading Thrall - rather behind in critiques. to be tangential. But I wanted to hit this last installment, if possible. Brief thoughts, da? ...

'Lo Tinny. ^_^ All for the Positive -- first impression is simply brilliant entry . I enjoyed the thing on each level, and you hit quite a few, pulling depth ...

Oy, the final remarks set up as a poem are more than clever. You've got double-meanings and depth in the best possible way. Brevity with thought - soul of wit, ...

Ha - the Mesh strikeout addition is hilarious. (''...[s]transmission[/s] email...") ^_^ IMP

Ah, I like it Sam - it's final two words are enough to make one want to keep on. The length of the sentences, in the final bit, where one ...

Sam -- Ha, yes - outlined, to an impish extent, finally . Cake's always brilliant for celebration. ^_^ And naturally, I'll toss you a PM or some such thing, if ...

..::Bloody Rotten Update::.. computer died. Not so uncommon, in the blunt sense of idiotic programming and sometimes idiotic choices. But it swallowed every document I had on it and so, ...

Yes. ...Not always and not endlessly, but rather often. IMP

Moved to Randomness IMP

Are these three excerpts then, the three branches or paths the story might take? In the end, I think you'll have to choose yourself. ^_^ Ah, but for advice ... ...

'Lo Stillgrave, There's something peaceful about the narrative here, bordering archaic in tone and atmosphere, beginning quietly. Honestly, it's neatly done on almost all points. Noting that it is the

Happy Birthday, Mlle. Clau. ^_^ And all the Imp's best wishes for year seventeen, da? IMP

Dai , no worries, vero? A critique by midnight is a critique on time; and some deadlines get nearer the dead part than is necessarily needed. ^_~ No threatening the ...

[spoiler]I have to agree about the epiolgue, but I can see what it was necessary. Ok, what confused me? Wasn't Harry named Teddy's godfather? Then why wasn't Teddy with the ...

1) How much do you read? The whole thing? A few articles? The announcements? A: All of it, generally. 2) Do you try out any of the games on the ...